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Paper tiger

Status: Offline Joined: 28 Oct 2010 Posts: 8 $poons: 0.20
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 2:38 pm Post subject: Comedy Blog |
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Hey guys I am new to blogging and I need some fans. I need some feedback as well.
http://thoughtsofapapertiger.blogspot.com/
Some of my articles include:
The Irony of 'Glee'
Rumors of 2012 Sequal, 2009 : 'Director promises the biggest man-made disaster since the establishment of its predecessor'
and
Facebook: the playground for narcissists and nitwits
I would really appreciate Feedback!
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admeister


Status: Offline Joined: 22 Jan 2006 Posts: 13915 $poons: 983.60 Location: Melbourne

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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 3:32 pm Post subject: |
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I like it. I don't think you need to go out of your way to explain what a paper tiger is though, seems a little condescending. I totally agree about Glee, I can't stand that show! _________________
"The first person to prove that cow's milk is drinkable was very, very thirsty." - Fact Sphere.
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Paper tiger

Status: Offline Joined: 28 Oct 2010 Posts: 8 $poons: 0.20
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:14 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the honest feedback, it is highly appreciated! I will delete the explanation.
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